Saturday, April 13, 2013

Primeval


Life lingers not in tails of falling stars.  Life is your screaming soul- where tangible meets definitive, driven mad by the laughter of absolution- Dreams are the blood truth licks from your lips.

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This weekend we're asking for exactly 33 of your own words inspired by the following quote-
“It's the possibility of having a dream come true that makes life interesting.” 
 ― Paulo Coelho, Alchemist
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16 comments:

  1. Love the title & the poem is so apt:-)

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  2. Wow, this is so powerful! I really love that last line.

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  3. With this text I picture a woman standing, her fingers are pulling her face downwards almost like if she's exposing herself as the skin moves down. Does that make sense?

    This part "driven mad by the laughter of absolution" was really cool. Not that the other parts weren't. I'm a spaz.

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  4. Um...wow. This is amazing, as always!

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  5. Chilling and fantastic. I'm actually floored by how good this is!

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  6. The title so well matched the feeling of this piece and of the several fantastic phrases here, this was my favorite: driven mad by the laughter of absolution.

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  7. Actually, Yoda already said it 33 years ago. Much simpler and to-the-point than my words. But thank you ;-)

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  8. "Dreams are the blood truth licks from your lips."

    Love that part. Your writing once more astounds.

    Thanks for linking up!

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  9. Oh, jeez, this is mindblowingly gorgeous. "Life is your screaming soul" has such a ring of honest truth to it.

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  10. Primeval, yes. Between life and dreams, give me a nightmare! Powerful stuff.

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