Saturday, March 30, 2013

O-Positive

With each incarnation
of every dream
the blood comes in rivers,
snaking down the inside of her thighs.  
The only towel I have is threadbare and raveling;
the vultures are circling her eyes.  

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"This weekend we're asking for exactly 33 words including an idiom somewhere within." 
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20 comments:

  1. Wow. Just, wow. Wow. I read this over several times, each time I found some new meaning or imagery. Just wow. This is really good.

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  2. Holy sh--

    I am in awe of your beautiful talent with words.

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  3. I like the incarnation of every dream, very haunting.

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  4. This one is so sad and haunting - Love the feeling of helplessness with the towel.

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  5. brilliant imagery and beep analysis in few words. you rule.

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  6. The imagery here is quite powerful. This is written wonderfully.

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  7. Just wow. Everything has been said already, all I have left is Wow..

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  8. Fantastic, but so sad! Beautifully done.

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  9. What a powerful saga of a woman's life-so well said in just 33 words!Excellent piece!

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  10. Very nice sorry in missed it on the first round.

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  11. Congratulations! Most well deserved win!

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