Saturday, March 23, 2013

Carbon-Based

Fetid fellows all- 
peeking from your horde
mocking rain with twisted faces
Dare- old boys- remember her not
the taste of her infection
nor her prurient rebellion
Is it love? Oh, no. 
just a foolish infatuation. 
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Trifextra Week Sixty-
"We are giving you three words and asking that you add another 33 to them to make a complete 36-word response. You may use the words in any order you choose."
remember
rain
rebellion
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10 comments:

  1. ooooooooooooooooooo - deliciously dark

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  2. Oh that was hard-hitting, very! Effective, and good to read.

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  3. the darkness is so intoxicating, isn't it, Goddess?

    Excellent wordplay. This would make a great longer poem.

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  4. This is a wicked cool piece.

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  5. Is the rain wicked here ? Infectious ?

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  6. Simply superb-loved the last line:-)

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  7. Hmmm beware infatuation! Hard-hitting poem.

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  8. I'm liking the darker pieces and I really like this one. Great job!

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  9. Ahh, niiice- wicked and deliciously dark

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