Friday, January 25, 2013

concept in utero

She gathers her children in the dark.
Time Boys leap the ages
on stevia-loaded sig sauer memories.
Cheek it momma-
Roll it
Chew it
Spit the pain
A story shall bleed this night.
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 Trifextra Week Fifty-Two-
This weekend, we're sending you back to English 101 to revisit the concept of literary devices.  We want you to give us a 33-word example of personification
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17 comments:

  1. Whoa!This is cool!I like it-"chew it-spit the pain"-yep,that's the only way!:-)

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  2. you told a while story in strema of consciencenous using the prompt like a muscled body. bad ass. I loved it.

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  3. I think my own post is such a piece of shit compared to this! Brilliantly conceived, constructed and delivered. Tour de Force, my dear.

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  4. another birthing image . . . well played.

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  5. I believe I just got a glimpse of your prenatal ultrasound

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  6. You guys are too nice. Thank you ;-)

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  7. Suddenly I'm looking at your blog background in a different light!

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  8. A story shall bleed this night, and yes, as Kymm says, your blog background has suddenly become more vivid. Wonderful!

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  9. Sigh. This reminds me of how I used to write. I need to try to get back to that. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

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  10. Lots of love hidden in this gem...

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  11. There's grace in this. Lovely piece.

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