Friday, December 28, 2012

Blood in the Trashcan

The power of second-guessing compels me
Backspacix
Deletery
Erasorcism
Obstipated clouds of verb/bloat pissin’ on my nonesuch
compel me-
powering the neverminers of flecking painite
Dichroic sweets and sours
begging to be saved.
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Trifextra Week Forty-Eight -
"This weekend we're asking for 33 of your own words that exorcise a demon. One of your own, or one from your imagination.  Let it bleed on the page."
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13 comments:

  1. Oh, delicious! Second-guessing is a demon most foul, I agree.

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  2. Blimey, reading this is like being high.

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  3. I talk to myself a lot...I say what I would have said, scowl hte way I would have scowled, used those big, hurtful words, the second time around. ;)

    Yes, these thoughts keep me up at night, just like they do to most of us I think.

    However, you write it in a tasty pie of verbage. SO GOOD.

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  4. I know of second-guessing. It's a terrible little demon, always rearing its head at the worst times.

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  5. we are a lot alike....I'm also third guesser and a fourth guesser. sucks.

    tight and powerful...great work, yo

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  6. Great post. I am the queen of second guessing. I get this...

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  7. This is lovely and true for a lot of us, I suspect. I like Tony's comment. And I say that with respect and sincerity. The word flow here is fantastic.

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  8. I love the word play. And second guessing is a bitch.

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  9. Second guessing is a demon I battle too. Love the word ballet here... wonderful.

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  10. If second guessing is a type of demon then I must have the high priest visiting me ever single time I go shopping.

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  11. Second-guessing myself is torture for me. I analyze and dissect my decisions to death. I make myself crazy. Torture I tell you! -Happy New Year to you!!!

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