Sunday, October 7, 2012

True Story





Wildman from the jungle came
bearing his sacred coconut
Yet, his tribal skill faltered
amidst the witchcraft of
his cheap pocketknife.
Savagery alone cleaved not
his fruit divine,
and stabbed his leg instead.  

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Trifextra Week Thirty-Six
"Here are some photos to inspire you.  
Choose one and give us a metaphor or simile to help describe what you see.  
Make your analogy 33 words or less, 
and make it clever or witty or unusual enough to grab our attention."
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4 comments:

  1. Laugh out loud. You've used the picture and words very well. (RogRites)

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  2. Love the witchcraft behind a cheap pocketknife.

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  3. It seems that Wildman is a tad clumsy! You took us on an unexpected ride with your well crafted words.

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