Saturday, August 25, 2012


Fly away
sweet Gracie May
From stages slick
for grind ballet
From filthy hands
pretend to pray
Lovely hips
bound soul buffet
Your sparkle void
disgraced Monet
to dance with angels
fly away

Trifextra Week Thirty-
This weekend we want you to write a 33-word response using the name of an animal as a verb.



  1. You're so eloquent and poetic. I'm like a brash little sister who stomps around a china store with a huge backpack compared to you. Come fly away with me will ya?

  2. I'm with Marie. I'm the brash older brother who would crack a joke at a funeral. That said, this was lovely. Oops, should I be using the word "lovely" as the brash older brother? Wtf?

  3. Well then, I'm the cousin no one talks about, but everyone knows is there. -Great job!

  4. It's not good to be jealous so I will be green with envy of your poetic talent. Beautiful.

  5. i like how rmantic and light this is is comparison to your other stuff. I love itwhen you show your versatility.

    bra and then a vo

  6. "From stages slick
    for grind ballet" ... Nice.