Friday, June 1, 2012

Ischemia

It wasn’t the first time
yet the elephant, as ruthless.
Flutterby dysrhythmia mocked sweet sinus quo.
Shatterfall, song of glass -
An arm wrenched within morbidity's precious quagmire
“Say, oh God absolute-
Say she knows I love her.”

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Trifextra Week Nineteen- "It wasn't the first time"
..... in 33 words.
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7 comments:

  1. WOW! I really like the line, "morbidity's precious quagmire"--what a way to express it!

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  2. 'The Persian Red Railway
    Bound in chains of sightless harmony
    Call for insecticide'.

    Grant Morrison

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  3. The word flow is exquisite but the sentiment is art. I loved this so much. I have to read it again.

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  4. One of the more complex entries I've read this weekend.

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  5. Sorry for the late comment here. This is absolutely gorgeous. It took me three reads through (go figure) and now I'm smitten. Thanks for linking this up with us. We're lucky to have you.

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