Friday, March 16, 2012

Little Bodhi Lost

indulgent, we
our brush fires, fences
seducing grace in boxes
bodies, soul trapper
daydreams, terra bound
one smile, a quantum spark
it’s far beyond hominal tears
within the great without
found, are we.
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Trifextra weekend challenge
"This weekend's challenge is to write a story entitled 'Lost' in exactly 33 words. The word 'lost' can only appear in the title, not your 33 words."

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7 comments:

  1. I like how you used the opposite: found are we

    :)

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  2. Seducing grace in boxes has a sense of duality. smiles

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  3. One smile, a quantum spark ...
    I like the possibilities you have created here.
    Regards,
    Ruby

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  4. I liked the hominal tears. Added a historical and therefore timeless feel to the poem

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  5. Thanks for linking up this weekend. How, in 33 words, you've given me so much to ponder is beyond me. My favorite bit of this was "daydreams, terra bound." So pretty. Hope to see you back again soon.

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